AxolotlAndy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[When the characters are too THICC]

This was solid, however I felt the first skit went on way too long. Your, uh, 'younger' VA's could use some better coaching/direction. I really loved the format of this video and the animation and character design is s l i c c.

[Friendly Little Creature]

I just love the dialogue it sounds so genuine.

[One Reality Over - [motivational]]

That is one powerful elephant

[King .K Rool is OP!!!Super Smash Bros Ultimate]

Inaccurate. The new grounding mechanics mean that a 0% Jiggly could EASILY bust out of a Krool D-throw.

[RubberOnionBattle Jan 2019]

Easy #2. Actually knew how to tell a good joke in the allotted timeframe.

[The Therapist]

Probably should've ended it after "Where do I sign?" but otherwise holy shit damn that one got me. Props.

[Annoying Adventurers Episode 2 The Gaming Experience]

Steve you're great. Love the enthusiasm here. Ya need work though homeboy. Lot of it. The first thing that immediately bugged me was how James was drawn with filled in click-and-drag shapes. Broham draw your best damn circle no matter how bad it looks, the consistency in style will help a ton going forward. Second thing I want to highlight is the mouths. Move em forward. Having someone talk out their jawline looks straight up off-putting.

Truth be told a lot of what you could improve on will just come with time if you keep at this sort of thing. A big thing I'd recommend is using a smaller brush size for your outlines. It'll give you more room for the faces and clothes to breathe a little.

Your intro & credits should also be heavily cut down, doesn't add a terrifying amount right now. Regardless of all this I took note of the black and white sections that were actually really well done. Sketchy af, but really stark in terms of quality compared to the rest of the schtick.

Keep doing what you're doing, and recognize that you're still chilling with the bottom boyos right now. Don't stop drawing and keep trying to do better, don't wallow in the same stuff you're used to. I believe in you SteveTheRapper. Row Row, fight the power.

stevetherapper responds:

Thanks! Also that’s James from FlashFloodStudios. Ask him.

[Dom - ASMR (ft Lapis Fox Animations)]

Fucking. It got me. This shouldn't have made me laugh but it did. God damnit you win Dom.

thedominickcollectio responds:

haha, glad I got you to laugh lol

[Every fight with K. Rool]

Solid enough but you could've drawn more frames for the croc. Not to mention every K. Rool game I've personally played involved a crown thrown :3c

[The Temple - 2D Animated Short]

Home boy I am DIGGING those beats in this track.